Kaz
This is the first one I've seen with no sound, just captions and I think it works well

Kieran
I know it is a low buget school 60 second film, but as a fellow student who had to study Much Ado About nothing, it didn't help at all. You could have done a lot better. I hope none of them was taking Drama as a GCSE.

Wan
A bit boring and dull.